I like a rhyme that curls the toes and mists the brow
telling a tale as fresh as tomorrow that comes in a dream but is real
and chills the heat of the restless kiss, escaping a lover’s lips.
Nothing spoken caresses the impact on the senses
like a passionate poem with soul-filled stanzas
I like a rhyme that curls the toes and mists the brow.
To a reverie back in time to the moment that captured the soul
lost in the soul-mate meeting, found in the loss of the Self
and chills the heat of the restless kiss, escaping a lover’s lips
O what has become of the reverie that comes in a dream but is real
longing for belonging, for only the Lost and the Found
I like a rhyme that curls the toes and mists the brow
and chills the heat of the restless kiss, escaping a lover’s lips
Oh me too!
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us girls just like romance, don’t we? 🙂
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Clearly not intended to adhere to the Villanelle format….Metre, Rhyme and Length? 😉
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actually I thought it was… but I’m not a poet. here’s the guidelines I followed: “19 lines, two rhymes throughout, each 5 tercets and a quatrain. 1st and 3rd lines of first trecet recurring alternately at end of other tercets, and with both repeated at close of concluding quatrain.” Let me find the source of that… 🙂
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Have a look here :
https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/poetic-form-villanelle
You’ll find here the classic example in Dylan Thomas’…
‘Do not go gentle in the night’….
Hugs!
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I just printed out Mad Girl’s Love Song, Sylvia Plath. I also saw Dylan Thomas the one you mentioned,…. now I am challenged to write a real Villanelle. 🙂
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Yes…..Love that one of Sylvia Plath. 😉
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I like it too.
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printed the pages you mentioned. I am obsessive…they didn’t call me the Note Card Queen for nothing. 🙂 stay tuned….
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Very Good….Your Ladyship!!! 😉 Hugs.
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been listing books for sale…frustrating task. I need to do ebay stuff too, but I would rather just hang out and expound on one thing or another.
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the more I work on my poor lost attempt at a Villanelle the worse it gets. I think it is what it is, and can’t be hammered into something else. It has its own rhythm, or meter, or whatever…and does not take well to being rewritten. Perhaps I shall set aside my poor lost love and write about a red maple tree instead… 🙂
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Take a ‘breather’…..Have a fresh ‘Go’… 😉
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good idea
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