(Re-posted from the original, written in response to Day 3: Writing 101-Poetry, Sleep)
I can sleep anywhere, any time.
day or night…or afternoon
On airplanes or in cars
(when not driving)Obviously a genetic trait,
the love of sleep,
and its never too late
to stop counting sheep.A deep pleasure shared by many
of my progeny, whom I call
champions and pros:
They are World Class Sleepers all!
©Sometimes,2015
This is delightful! 🙂
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thanks Carol! I wondered it if need more, but decided not. 🙂
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It’s perfect as is!
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I think less is more…this is why I like yours so much, because it is succinct and sweet…you get in, make your point, and end it. I try to do the same.
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Thank you but yours is beautiful!
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🙂
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Super……..Tempted to say….’Sleep On…’…..meaning..’Enjoy your great gift of Sleep’….;) Hugs! ❤
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indeed…airplanes were always my favorite sleeping places I’d be asleep before we left the tarmac. 🙂
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Ahhhh…..Sleepy head! 😉 Hugs! ❤
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yes indded…fell asleep while laboring over the last line in my current poem. 🙂
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Short and sweet. I like your rhythm as well. 🙂
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thank you so much. I enjoy writing poetry. 🙂
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You’re welcome. So do I. 🙂
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it’s fun comparing notes with others doing the same thing.
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Yes it is. I enjoy reading other poets. 🙂
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I do too, sometimes I’m inspired to write one of my own…I do enjoy other poets’ work, each style is unique:-)
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That is a great blessing.
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I know…it doesn’t always apply to times when I have a big issue weighing heavily. 🙂
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