What I remember
of that day in September
is the Canadian shore line
drifting away to the North.
The warm sun and the rafters
of the ferry as it lumbered
southward, plying the waters,
widening the distance encumbered.
Green and gold on the tree line,
still shades of autumn, the hint
of coming winter still vague.
The horn sounded farewell as it widened the wake,
and set off on its great voyage across the lake.
©Sometimes, 2016
I feel like I was there!
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me too…
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Delightful imagery…..almost picturesque! 😉 Hugs!
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thank you imagination is a wonderful thing
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That’s lovely – I can see myself on that ship at the stern, watching the wake and looking at the colours.
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thanks so much! I agree, maybe because it is an imaginary scenario that comes from a deeper place.
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We have to concentrate more, I think, when we do that, rather than just describing.
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if I try too hard I don’t always like the results.
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Yes, it can become a bit forced or self-conscious. I think of my writing as trying to be as true to the picture in my imagination as possible, picking the words and phrases that most accurately depict it.
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yes! those images do have a way of forming out of the consciousness stream. I love how sometimes words I didn’t even know that I knew come to the front…
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when I wrote that I was actually thinking of an ocean voyage, and my imagination supplied the Canadian aspect 🙂
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