Would it be possible
to invent a whole new
society to parallel ours?
It could be done in a dream
or in a stream of consciousness,
where the creator did not
pause from the stages
of planning or imagining
such a society.First there would be a door–
really quite an ordinary door
without a window–
or it could have a pane of
translucent glass.
This door would have no lock
and it would only open one way.Once a decision is made
there is a chance to change
one’s mind–but only one
final choice when the time
is up. IN or OUT?
The new society–or the old?This is where the new society
is formed. What will be the criteria?
Who will be in charge?
Who will decide WHO is in charge?
Until these decisions are made…
society will ever loom large.© Sometimes, 2016
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I really like this. There is a prompt site that has as its weekly prompt this week the word “revolution” this would be perfect for that! Here’s the link:
http://andytownend.com/2016/02/17/poetry101rehabrevolution/
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thanks, Carol, I’ll check it out right now. (I have a short attention span 🙂
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So do I
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I did send the link to 101 rehab. Thanks for the link… 🙂
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Perfect for the 101 rehab, sorry for late reply…
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thanks again. I lose track of the prompts. but I’ll try to get my act together. 🙂
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