I do enjoy trying out different forms of poetry…especially since I apparently was not paying attention back in my school day English writing class. Here is the link to Carpe Diem, which is a favorite poetry site of mine. The link explains in gorgeous detail the technique and history of the “leap linkage” form….which is a form of Haiku. http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/11/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-17.html
This is about five months overdue…but since that probably won’t be held against me I will venture to pass on a few of my practice Haiku which may–or may not–meet the leap linkage criteria. (With apologies to the Master, Basho.)
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follow beckoning new buds
take care to step carefully
snow sometimes lingers2
new green shoots beckon
heed Caution’s whisper: “Take care!”
hurry–but slowly…3
Spring arrives with passion
pending blooms warn the wary
ice patches remain.4
Day begins cheery
but can quickly turn dreary
when one is weary.5
To worry too much
about stubbing toes
forgets overhead.© Sometimes, 2016
If I fail as poet of the form, perhaps I can find work writing fortune cookie notes. 🙂
great poem! I believe there is no failure as a poet, only a scope to strive for yet more perfection…
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thank you, Amit. I love writing poetry, I find it so rewarding in many ways. 🙂
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it sure is!
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hope you have a pleasant holiday…
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oh I am on a holiday since June last year 😀
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ah ha…:-)
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it is interesting how a long, involved sentiment written in prose can be wrapped up so nicely in a brief poem. I like the short poetry forms for that reason.
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same here!
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brevity is good sometimes
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sublime and brief, that is the best kind of poetry for me!
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I like rhyming poetry, and /or meter and rhythm. 🙂
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I am an adherent of metrical poetry!
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I am too… your poetry is always nice to read.
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thank you! hope you are having a great Sunday!
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yes thanks. 🙂
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Interesting innovation….doing well, P! Hugs! ❤
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my version at least, Basho invented the form… thank you for encouragement, I do enjoy these various forms 🙂
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Hope you have a lovely Easter! 🙂 We are going to my sis-in-law’s place where they serve fabulous feasts for residents….excellent brunch.
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Excellent. Have a Super Day. Sending you Easter Hugs! ❤️
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their buffets are marvelous, or they also do sit-down service. My sis-in-law will soon be 96. She enjoys having the option to invite guests
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