the sword of Damacles
begins its creaking dissent
amid madness and bitter resentment
the darkening dawn ahead… prescient.
Armaggedon beckoning (to borrow a phrase
from a friendly poet) with skillful ways to praise
using words of beauty…or malaise
born of forethought…not meaning to surprise.
As fear and foreboding take their toll
among the nervous and volatile
the peace and self-confidence wane
as the shadow lengthens o’er the terrain.
© Sometimes, 2016
Beautiful P! Poignant to say the least!
Fantastic Classical Allusion….Sword of Damocles. Just refreshed my memory….Superb! Have a look here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Damocles Hugs! ❤
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your comment refreshed my memory … I love it when some long buried notion suddenly proves itself to have survived among the trivia. Now I’m wondering if the vision I had stemmed also from something Edgar Allen Poe wrote about a sword swinging horizontally above a man’s shackled body lying on a table. The Pit and the Pendulum, perhaps? Thanks for the allusion and also the nudge. 🙂
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Might well relate to the ‘Pit etc’ scene….. 🙂 Hugs!
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I read “the Pit and Pendulum” last night. I had completely forgotten its content…perhaps when I first read it I did not understand its intent.
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Many people do not make the Classical connection…. 😉 Hugs!
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English Lit was a favorite of mine, and the Classics have presented themselves and re-presented themselves to me over the decades…what might have been torture back in “the day” easily contain delights that vary as I have grown older.
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Enjoy the revisits…. 😉 Hugs!
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ah, since my muse has returned from her sabbatical she wants me to publish my own deathless prose. lol
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Please do! Deathless prose can turn to life…. 😉 Hugs! ❤
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sometimes its like pulling teeth, though. My big mouth volunteered to cook thanksgiving dinner next week…its for my ancient sisterinlaw, who has a problem maneuvering some of the family houses w/stairs and all.
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my favorites are the ones that lead me to ask myself “what in the heck does THAT mean”
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I checked the Wikipedia entry…fascinating.
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quite appropo recent events, too. The election is over, but so many are still beating the dead horse! They need to take a deep breath and figure out what to do now instead of second-guessing it all. Name-calling is not helpful. 🙂
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