Doubt

some words of wisdom from Opinionated Man (Jason)

HarsH ReaLiTy

I cut her with a little doubt. Not enough to break her, but enough to make her doubt herself. I watch as confusion clouds the clarity of her eyes as everything she thought she knew dies. And instead of despise, I feel her need to find herself once more. To remove the doubt I have placed as I doubt what we have.

-OM

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4 thoughts on “Doubt

  1. Ooh! I’m trying to decide if this is verse in prose form, or prose that sounds like verse! The domino effect of planting one doubt is captured succinctly. Makes me wonder if there is a verse form that would sharpen it up even more?

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